Journey
of a Hundred Years By Ida Fasel
Small Poetry Press, 2002 48 pages
Journey of a Hundred Years is the
fifth full poetry collection by Ida Fasel. From beginning to end, she
employs the terse form of the cinquain, a five line stanza of two, four,
six, eight, and two syllables, to explore different topics. Writing in the
same form throughout all ten chapters could have made the tone monotonous,
but Fasel uses enjambment and a variety of themes from angels to Zen to
keep the perspective fresh. Some of the cinquains stand alone on a single
page while others are linked together to create layered pieces. Sometimes,
even within these layered pieces, one cinquain would soar above the others
as in this stanza from "Subtle Season": Autumn/ choreographs/ a
dance so difficult,/ all a leaf on toe point can do/ is fall.
I would recommend this collection to:
someone who enjoys reading clear, concise poetry or someone who would like
to learn more about cinquains by seeing its form put to paper by an
accomplished poet. I think this Fasel's poetry should be read as she
suggests in these lines from "Ars Poetica": Between/ lines where
white shows/ on the pages, reading is/ best. Linger. The poet gives and/
holds back. Her style feels natural, and not forced for the sake of
fitting the form. Her stanzas seem to flow effortlessly from one to the
next, yet there are pauses where the reader can ponder one cinquain before
moving on.
This review has taken me longer to write
than any other review I've ever written because I would refer to the book
to recall a certain line or stanza and end up reading all of the poems
again. That's how much Fasel's poetry and her elliptic style influences
me. This collection will be enjoyed time and again. I leave you with this
one last cinquain to savor from Journey of a Hundred Years: Will I/
come to the bridge,/ will I make the last hard/ inch, the difficult full
distance/ across?
Poppy Hullings
"Journey of a Hundred Years" by Ida Fasel (Catalog #18051) can be ordered from Thaddeus books:
http://www.thaddeusbooks.com/poetry.htm

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