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The Cinquain as a Speculative Poem
by Joshua Gage

For the past three years, the Speculative poetry community has produced, under Deborah Kolodji's guidance, an anthology of poetry entitled Dwarf Stars. This yearly anthology, now also an award anthology from the Science Fiction Poetry Association and co-edited by Stephen M. Wilson, collects the best published poems of the previous year written with ten lines or less. Included in the second anthology, the 2006 Dwarf Stars, is this cinquain by Ann K. Schwader.

Muertos Moon

Sugar
skull swung between
voids…what beloved name
etches itself across craters
tonight?

- Ann K. Schwader
World Haiku Review, Summer 2005

Since this publication, the speculative world has seen more and more cinquains published. This article will examine the different genres of speculative cinquains, hopefully introducing non-speculative cinquain writers a glimpse into the speculative poetry world and new, exciting markets for cinquains.

Science Fiction

This is perhaps the most obvious and famous of all speculative genres. From Jules Verne to the X-files and everything in between, science fiction has been capturing the minds of audiences for over a century. As with all speculative genres, Science Fiction speculates alternate possibilities, specifically in the realms of science and technology. This could be anything from planet exploration, extra terrestrials, alternate histories, prophetic futures:

No Gene Kelly on Mars

no rain
is expected
on this waterless world
and no one sings in the sonic
shower

- Deborah P Kolodji
The Shantytown Anomaly #2, March 2006



On the Road with Apollo

"Dig those
gas giants, man-
far out--but cold, god, cold
Can't this heap go any faster?
Where's Earth?"

Like, chill
It's about the journey--the feel
of hot chariot wheels
on cool, cosmic
blacktop

- Karen A. Romanko
Amaze: The Cinquain Journal, Spring 2006

Even new applications of current technologies, such as time travel and robots, will fall under the heading of science fiction poetry:

Testimony Given on the Firing of The Weapon

Just rock -
that's what I saw,
and fired when they told me.
One planet, many million lives,
just rock.

- Marcie Lynn Tentchoff,
On Our Way to Battle: Poetry From the Trenches, Fall 2006

Science fiction poetry can even include non-fictional science elements used as metaphors for something else:

Deep Impact

I launch
myself at you,
eager to expose clues -
you continue your journey past
my world

- Deborah P Kolodji
Astropoetica, Winter 2006

Clearly, science fiction has a lot to offer the cinquain genre, and cinquains, in turn, have much to offer to science fiction poetry.

 

Fantasy

If Science Fiction is the main genre of speculative literature, then fantasy is the close runner up. Literature historians can argue that this is the first speculative poetic genre, citing ancient epics, such as The Odyssey and Beowulf as proof. Also, the release of films such as The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe and J.R.R. Tolkein's Lord of the Rings trilogy has renewed the popular interest in this genre, creating a wider market for fantasy poetry. Indeed, some of the first cinquains ever published were in this genre:

THE SOURCE

Thou hast
Drawn laughter from
A well of secret tears
And thence so elvish it rings,-mocking
And sweet:

- Adelaide Crapsey

WINTER

The cold
With steely clutch
Grips all the land…alack,
The little people in the hills
Will die!

- Adelaide Crapsey

It is a more difficult genre to define than Science Fiction because it uses mythic and folkloric elements from different cultures, and thus crosses over often into mythic poetry, folklore poetry, etc. Some would argue that the language of the work defines it as fantasy, but this convention is constantly challenged by modern writers, to the point that it is almost mute. However, many modern cinquain poets are also working within this genre as well:

"Dragons!
No, not dragons,"
the pioneer spat out.
"When we first landed, now those were
dragons!"

- gK

Icarus

He soared
and touched the sun.
And yes, it burned his wings.
His fall, a meteorite's streak
to earth,

tragic
and terrible.
And yet, that lure of sky
remains. We gaze above and dream
of flight.

- J. E. Stanley
Amaze: The Cinquain Journal, Summer 2006


Road Tripping: Santa Fe

This land
of coyote &
raven . . . trickster highway
twisting through each shifting vein of
sunset.

- Ann K. Schwader
Amaze: The Cinquain Journal, Summer 2007


what if
I were to stand
earless in Shangri-La,
would your soft hands learn to sing me
bird songs?

- Michael L. Evans
Modern English Tanka, Winter 2006

This genre of speculative poetry clearly has much to offer the cinquain writer, in terms of content.

 

Horror

Horror can be seen as the third leg of speculative poetry alongside fantasy and science fiction. That being said, it would behoove poets new to speculative genres to not enter horror with preconceived notions in mind. The genre has advanced beyond vampires, werewolves, and other stereotypical Halloween accoutrements. While those tropes are still used, and still played with, horror has expanded into genres that could include things like thrillers and suspense. Like other speculative genres, horror is no stranger to cinquain writers, either:

Final Words

Embalmed,
he speaks aloud
at his own funeral.
"Don't I look like myself?" he says,
grinning.

- Marge Simon
Doorways Magazine, Aug. 2007

Indeed, horror isn't necessarily horrific, but at times merely darkly themed, with hints of the horrific beneath the surface.

Dancer

The girl
knows the routine
dances upon the altar
bone choir singing dark hosannas
off key.

- G.O. Clark
Wicked Hollow, May 2004

In fact, horror can been seen as the dark side of other speculative genres, as in "dark fantasy" or "dark science fiction":


Xocoatl

drinking
ancient wisdom
from blood-stained cacao pods-
powerful sips of Paradise
linger

- Deborah P Kolodji
Doorways Magazine, Aug. 2007

In face, some horror cinquains simply allude to other horrific novels, using them as a source of inspiration.

Whispering Voices

At night
Cthullu waits
Inviting Old Ones to
Open dream-doors and resurrect
The stars.

- Christopher Danaher
Doorways Magazine, Aug. 2007

In My World

Grendel
rises at dusk,
stalks his prey by starlight
as shadows of dragons eclipse
the moon.

- J.E. Stanley

However, like the other speculative genres, horror clearly has much to offer the cinquain writer, in terms of content and inspiration.

As with any poetic genre, the cinquain will seek out niches in which it cannot only survive, but thrive. Because of the strong crossover between speculative poets and cinquain poets, the speculative genres are clearly one breeding ground for very potent cinquains. It is hoped that this tradition continues, and that more cinquain poets find themselves published in speculative magazines, and perhaps even in future Dwarf Stars anthologies.


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